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All I feel for you is wasting away
as the seconds count down, and the days grow longer
Time is never ending, it feels like years since we last spoke.

My imagination was always creeping ahead of me, they say it's not even a week.
What do they know? Nothing of my pain, and my torment,
and that never ending need for, what's that word,
Love?

I've burnt them all at the stake, mentally if you will,
Ashes to ashes, and dust to dust.
Gone in the blink of an eye, as quick as the tears I shed for you.
For me, for us.

Life has a meaning, I know it does.
Tell me, when will I find it?
Or have I found it, just my blind eyes have yet to
awaken to it?

Yes, we'll blame it on ourself,
The only person we've ever been willing to hurt.
The only person we've ever really wanted to.

I thought I'd done enough damage, guess I never will.
My heart stopped beating the day we met, will you start it up again?
Start it up before I lose the meaning,
of a warm hand and a gentle touch.
Let me breath so I can finally say,
I love you from the bottom of my broken heart.
:iconrubber-ducky-of-doom:

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:icontehgabecat:
:glomp: Tis beautiful. Got me kinda misty-eyed. =P You write amazing poetry, love. Just another thing for me to love about you. :smooch:
:iconrubber-ducky-of-doom:
You are ... amazing. I love you... :hug: :smooch: :heart:

and that did get me misty eyed ;P

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The most wonderful feeling in the world,
is you in my arms,
just after I lost you
:icontehgabecat:
No, YOU are amazing... and I love you too. :cuddle::hug::heart:
:iconrubber-ducky-of-doom:
:blushes: thank you..... *lick*

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The most wonderful feeling in the world,
is you in my arms,
just after I lost you
:iconzachari:
Ahhh!!! Wonderful!! :+fav: XP!!! <3!!!! I love this absolutely!

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Zachari

---Life is a game... I win....!---
:icontehgabecat:
You are veddy welcome. :hug::lick: ^.^
:iconrubber-ducky-of-doom:
aww.. thank you :hug:

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The most wonderful feeling in the world,
is you in my arms,
just after I lost you
:iconrubber-ducky-of-doom:
:O licking... mmmm... sexxy

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The most wonderful feeling in the world,
is you in my arms,
just after I lost you
:iconworldsapart:
great job, you didn't hold back and it showed. great last line to "love you from the bottom of my broken heart" for nothing is more painful then that....

but what truly stand sout, and truly shows emotion. you did it with in one stanza...and here is where it hit me with the emotion i believe you were trying to express and did it...

"My imagination was always creeping ahead of me, they say it's not even a week. What do they know? Nothing of my pain, and my torment,
and that never ending need for, what's that word,
Love?"

amazing, great job, truly my fav that i have read of your work so far.

worldsapart..

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